El Fin One for the front page...
Keep this up and I think Newgrounds has witnessed a rare event indeed, the birth of yet another Flash God.
Considering this was your first flash, it was brilliant, absolutely flawless. So there's no way I could possibly write any 'constructive criticism' below, because quite frankly, there's none to be said.
I really hope this inspires more to take up flash, because as proven, if your willing to put in the work. Greatness will be achieved.
10/10